Critical Thinking Through Poessays

Getting your students to read and think through a poessay - a combination of the creative and the critical - will give them an insight into the working of the language and show them how to communicate more effectively.

Here, then, are seven poessays from Communicative Times.
Students need to select the correct answer and explain why it is so. Let's begin!

ポエッセイを通じて英語をクリティカルに読むトレーニングをしましょう。
次の7つのポエッセイはコミュニカティブタイムズより選びました。
それぞれのポエッセイの作者は何を言いたいのでしょう?
をクリックすると正しいかどうかわかります。)
また、それを説明しましょう。

What's
a Poessay?

ポエッセイって何?

関連サイト
For more on "Critical Thinking",
go to:
John Pereira's
EFL Japan/Critical Thinking

Train

This morning
I got up
late
I
hopped
on the
train

The
train
was
crowded

The
train
shook

My head
swam

because
I was
sleepy

I
crashed
into
my
neighbor

I
said
I'm sorry

After
a while

"Ouch!"

My foot
was
trodden on

but
my neighbor
pretended
to sleep



Yoriko Nagatani

Critical Thinking Exercise
What's the key point? And why?
キーポイントはa, b, c のうちどれでしょう?また、その理由を説明しましょう。

a) everybody is sleepy in the morning
b) taking the train in the morning is no picnic
c) you should say sorry when you step on somebody's foot

Explanations

During the rush hour in the morning, people are going to school, offices, and so on. Everyone wants to get on the crowded trains. The trains are packed and people can't move. But the train moves - and even shakes - and people pull and push each other! So people are in a bad, bad mood ....

Akane Sakamoto

She got up late and was sleepy. But she had to go out and she hopped on the crowded train. I think she couldn't feel good in such a condition .... And the worst thing was a passenger's attitude. It made her feel worse and worse ....

Perhaps, she should go to sleep early and it will not be so bad!

Tsukasa Oishi

In the morning we are sleepy! We are in a bad humor! I call it a "hot temper." For example, the other day my foot was stepped on by several people, but they didn't apologize! But when I trampled on somebody else's foot, he got angry even after I said I was sorry.

Yes, taking the train in the morning is no picnic. It's war!

Daisuke Mizuno


Kindness

On a crowded
train

I told
an old woman
to sit
in my seat

But
she said

I'm not
that old!

Miho Kawamura

Critical Thinking Exercise
What's the key point? And why?
キーポイントはa, b, c のうちどれでしょう?また、その理由を説明しましょう。

a) even kindness can be misunderstood
b) don't give seats to old people on trains
c) old people never think they are old

Explanations

It is a common courtesy to give up our seats to old people on trains in Japan. And we think people are old or not by their appearance. Women in particular don't like to look old. So, this woman felt that Miho's act was not kind, but rude.

Yui Kawagishi

Old people think "I am not old yet." But we think, "We should be kind to old people." And we think old people cannot stand up on trains for too long. So we offer our seats to old people on trains.

But old people sometimes misunderstand us. "Am I that old?" they ask themselves, and they sometimes get angry with us.

Here are two people who think differently and, as a result, a misunderstanding occurs ....

Tomoko Onishi

I think the poessayist was being kind to the old lady. But the old lady thought she was being rude.

When I was on a train recently, I offered my seat to an old lady, but she declined my offer. If, in future, I see an old lady standing on a crowded train, I'll think twice before I offer her my seat. I might think she's old, but she might not think so!

We want to be kind to old people, but to communicate even kindness is not easy. It can be easily misunderstood ....

Yuri Shibahara

A lot of people who are old don't want to think so. Therefore, kindness hurts.

But, being kind to people is very important, and a good thing too! People who are treated nicely by people of good will should accept their kindness graciously, I think.

Bunpei Hoshino


Breakdown

I've
spent
¥300,000
on my
driver's license

and now
I'm broke

How far
can I get
with only
my license?

Kumiko Tabuchi

Critical Thinking Exercise
What's the key point? And why?
キーポイントはa, b, c のうちどれでしょう?また、その理由を説明しましょう。

a) she's not a good driver
b) it costs too much to get a driver's license in Japan
c) she spends too much on gasoline

Explanation

She's broke! She's spent \300,000 to get her license - but she has no car! A common story, it is.

I think she should have saved money to buy a car, pay the insurance, and only then saved money to go to driver's school. I hope she will be able to buy a car in future.

Wakana Mori


Sky

The
sky

has
a lot
of
emotions

and
shows
her feelings

openly

We
know
when

she's
sad
angry

full
of hate
or
happy

How
I
envy
her!





Yuko Nagahata

Critical Thinking Exercise
What's the key point? And why?
キーポイントはa, b, c のうちどれでしょう?また、その理由を説明しましょう。

a) on sunny days the sky is happy and on rainy days sad
b) she doesn't show her true feelings
c) the writer wants to be able to express her feelings freely

Explanations

The sky is able to express her feelings openly: sunny days, rainy days, cloudy days, stormy days .... And the writer would like to do so, too. But, she pretends to be "a good girl" in the presence of others, even when she is upset or angry!

Perhaps she cares too much about what others think of her. So, she envies the sky.

Natsumi Seto

The sky can express her feelings freely. On a fine day, she appears happy. On a rainy day sad. And, when it thunders, she's angry!

Now, the writer can't express her feelings freely .... If she were a child, she could! But, she's a university student ....

Sayaka Tanaka

People can't always express their feelings freely. Why? Let me explain ....

The other day, my friend made a great effort to cook a meal for me. Although I ate it, I felt that the food wasn't at all delicious. But I didn't say a word!

Sometimes a few lies are needed.

Yuko Yagi


Unlucky

On
a rainy day

I
fell off
my bike
and
had to go
to hospital

where
pretty girls
looked
after me
well

Now
my left foot
and right arm
are
O.K.

but
I
leave
the hospital
with
a
broken
heart

Shinya Izawa

Critical Thinking Exercise
What's the key point? And why?
キーポイントはa, b, c のうちどれでしょう?また、その理由を説明しましょう。

a) he wants to have another accident
b) he is unhappy to leave the hospital
c) he has had a terrible heart attack

Explanation

On a rainy day he broke his left foot and right arm. That was unlucky. But, then, he had a happy time in the hospital because he was looked after by pretty girls. Now, that was lucky. He wanted to stay longer, but his left foot and right arm were healed and so he had to leave the hospital and go home. Again, he was unlucky.

Kana Maeda


Steak House

another
cow
gone mad

the manager
sighs

Maiko Fukuyama

Critical Thinking Exercise
What's the key point? And why?
キーポイントはa, b, c のうちどれでしょう?また、その理由を説明しましょう。

a) the cows are mad at the steak house
b) some cows are madder than others
c) business will probably be worse than usual

Explanation

Whenever we get new information about a case of mad cow's disease, we don't want to eat meat for a while. For, if we did, we might become mad. So people don't eat beef. They don't go to steak houses and, as a result, business at the steak houses is usually not good. And, sometimes, steak houses could lose money, or even have to shut down.

Junnosuke Fujikawa

Go to Home